Tuesday, 31 March 2015

Writing with Conviction


Writing with conviction (evidence) and heart (believe in what you write)



Question: What is the most significant contribution that Lee Kuan Yew made to transform Singapore from a developing to a developed world?

1. Find a quote that can capture your reflect your thought on this issue.
Reference: 91 quotes of Lee Kuan Yew show why you either hate him or love him
Link: http://mothership.sg/2014/09/91-quotes-of-lee-kuan-yew-that-show-why-you-either-love-or-hate-him/


2. Discuss:
Lee Kuan Yew's most significant contribution in transforming Singapore from a developing to a developed world
(just 100-150 words excluding the quote)

-Think about the way you should structure the paragraph.

-Write with conviction and heart.

3. Save this document in your own Dropbox.

4. We will post it on a blog next week.








Other links to writing with conviction:
  
Does your writing lack the conviction it deserves?
Link: http://goinswriter.com/writing-conviction/

Write and Speak with Conviction: 

Link: http://www.zenlawyerseattle.com/thoughts-on-personal-injury-law/speak-and-write-with-conviction/

Tuesday, 21 January 2014

Welcome to 1102

Welcome to 1102
Dear Students,
Welcome to ES 1102, English for Academic Purposes. My name is Misty Cook.
I will be your facilitator for 1102 this term. We will be covering many aspects in 1102 that will enhance your academic writing skills and prepare you for academic writing at NUS.
In particular, this course aims to guide you in:
  • sourcing for and understanding academic texts;
  • synthesising and integrating information into your writing;
  • writing essays and other assignments;
  • acknowledging sources in essays using an accepted documentation style;
  • using grammar and other language conventions accurately in context.
During the term, you will access the following links:
To get course materialshttp://edu.symbaloo.com/mix/es1102ontheweb
To submit the final drafts of your work-on IVLE: https://ivle.nus.edu.sg/
To write blogs and comment on each other's work, you will use this blog page on blogger.com
I look forward to working with you in the coming semester.
Misty

WEEK 7, SEM 2: ACADEMIC VOCABULARY

Objectives

When you have finished this section, you will be able to
 §  recognise technical terms specific to particular academic or scientific discipline

§  select appropriate words from the general academic vocabulary and use them in your own academic writing

 
Resource List

1)      Academic Vocabulary List in grammatical categories by Rick Smith: 


 
2)      Exercises on academic vocabulary, texts and concordance lines:

 

3)      The Longman Vocabulary site with exercises:

 

4)      Victoria University of Wellington’s site on Academic Word List and how to use it:


 
Key Concepts
  §  Academic vocabulary

§  Headwords & inflections

§  Academic Word List (AWL)

 

Procedure

 
A.    Before Class

 

1.     Review Features of Academic Writing.

a.        Note the choice of specific words/vocabulary used that differentiates a text as   

academic.

 
b.      Look at the websites in the Resource List and familiarize yourself with the

        academic word/vocabulary lists and also the sublists.

 

B.    In Class

 Recalling what you have learnt from the websites, either in pairs or in a small group,

 compare your answers for Tasks A, B, C & D. Be prepared to share your answers with  

 the rest of the class.

 

C.    After Class

Study the Additional Resources given at the end of this handout.

 

Tasks

 
A.    Discussion

1.       Working with a partner, start by going through Sublist 1 from the AWL Site 4. If

you know these words, move to Sublist 2 and work down to Sublist 10. As you move down the Sublists, note the words that are familiar.

 

2.       Compare the words you are familiar with to those your partner is familiar with.

         Discuss the words you are familiar with. Are these words from your own discipline

         or from your own vocabulary repertoire?              

      

B.    Word Building
  
       Below are some head words or the stem form of a word. Try to work out the

        various forms of the given head words, that is the inflections of the word.

 
        e.g. analyse
   

analysed
analyser
analysers
analyses
analysing
analysis
analyst
analysts
analytic
analytical
analytically
analyse
analysed
analyses
analysing
 
 
 

        §  conceive

§  valid

§  undertake

§  seek

§  precise

§  straightforward

§  trend

§  residue

§  regime

§  albeit

 

C.    Application

1.      In pairs or in small groups, reduce the informality of the following sentences by

        providing formal alternatives for the underlined words. Consult the AWL Site 4.

(a) Additionally, citizens in democratic regimes get easy access to information the

        Internet provides.

 

(b) Government agencies made forms and searchable databases online, making it

        easier for citizens to get their questions answered.

 

(c)  For countries enjoying the benefits of freedom and democracy, embracing the

        Internet has been relatively painless. For other nations, the course of action has

        proved more difficult.

 

(d)  The Internet will have become so interwoven in the fabric of their economic life

         that cutting off access will not be possible. De facto freedom of information will

         slowly emerge in these countries, even if never officially recognized. This will

         be one of the Internet's most important contributions to global civilization.

 

(e)   Internet pornography, now a multibillion-dollar industry and one of the first

        profitable sectors of the Internet economy, becomes a problem when it involves

        children or is viewed in a public setting. One study guesses that 20% of all

        white-collar males access pornography online while at work.

(f)    Finally, as we grow more dependent on the Internet, we grow more vulnerable. Before the Internet, viruses could be spread from one computer to another only through floppy disks. With the widespread availability of software downloaded from websites or sent out through email, viruses now spread like wildfire, covering the world in hours.

 

(g)   With so much of our public life now available online, terrorists no longer need to risk coming here to gather information before an attack, nor do they need to meet in person to talk.

 

(h)  The same factors that empower legitimate Internet users also empower those opposed to our national interests. There is no escaping this basic fact.

 

2.     Images from computer-predicted and actual functional magnetic resonance imaging scans. Examine the underlined words and phrases in the

        following text. Replace these words by selecting

        appropriate words from the AWL so that the text is

        formal and academic.

 

A Computer that Can “Read” the Mind                     
            by
            The National Science Foundation (US)
 
 
For centuries, the concept of mind readers was strictly the domain of folklore and science fiction. But according to new research published today in the journal Science, scientists are closer to knowing how specific thoughts activate your brains. The findings tell the power of computational modelling to improve your understanding of how the brain processes information and what you think.
 
The research was conducted by a computer scientist, Tom Mitchell, and a cognitive neuroscientist, Marcel Just, both of Carnegie Mellon University. Their previous research, supported by the National Science Foundation (NSF) and the W.M. Keck Foundation, had shown that functional magnetic resonance imaging(fMRI) can really detect and locate brain activity when a person thinks about a specific word. Using this data, the researchers made a computational model that made a computer to correctly figure out what word a research subject was thinking about by analysing brain scan data.
 
In their most recent work, Tom and Marcel used fMRI data to develop a more sophisticated computational model that can foretell the brain activation patterns associated with concrete nouns, or things that we experience through our senses, even if the computer didn’t already know the fMRI data for that specific noun.
Your Answers

 

Additional Resources

& The workbook, Focus on vocabulary: Mastering the academic word list, by Schmitt and Schmitt (2005), which is largely informed by the authors’ research on vocabulary and their extensive experience teaching vocabulary, is a useful resource that ES1102 students can independently use to develop their vocabulary in two semesters.  

Copies of this book, along with an answer key, are available at the Centre for English Language Communication SELF (Self-Access English Learning Facility, http://courseware.nus.edu.sg/itself/).

Another useful resource is the online website developed by Tom Cobb (Université du Québec à Montréal).

Complete Lexical Tutor v.6.2 at http://www.lextutor.ca/

The Complete Lexical Tutor v.6.2 is a free website with a concordancer, vocabulary profiler, exercise maker, interactive exercises, and other language learning resources for students, researchers, and teachers. 

ES1102 students will find the interactive tools useful for developing their vocabulary and grammatical accuracy.  The tutorial section aims to provide self-access learning opportunities for learners, e.g., testing their vocabulary, exploring their vocabulary levels, comparing active and passive vocabulary, using new words, reading and listening to a novel, and testing their grammar with concordances.